At the airport, Gate B4.
A teenage boy, pointing to a picture book:
Air flows around the wing, and the air pressure keeps the plane in the air. See? The pilot knows how to fly the plane. It's very safe.A woman, on the phone:
I took him to the store. I told him, "I'll buy you anything you want. I'll buy you everything in the store if you'll get on the plane." He picked out all this stuff, and I said, "Now you have to get on the plane," and he put it all back! He put it all back! What else can I do?Teenage boy:
So are you going to get on the plane? Mommy and I need you to get on the plane.The small voice of a young boy:
No, I'm scared.Woman:
You have to get on the plane. Where else are you going to go?Young boy:
I'm gonna see Daddy. You said he's at the airport.Woman:
Oh, Jesus!Teenage boy:
Daddy's at the other airport, in Baltimore. You have to take the plane there. Mommy and I really need you to get on the plane so you can go see Daddy.Woman:
If you don't get on the plane, I'm going to call the police. I'm going to call the police, and they're going to take you to jail.Young boy:
I'm not going! I'm not getting on the plane.Woman:
Fine. Then you'll go to jail. Do you want to go to jail?Young boy:
No...Woman:
What do you think? It's a black hole up there? Nothing's going to happen. Get on the plane!Teenage boy:
I'm going to get him some water. I'll be right back.The teenage boy got up. He walked away from the gate toward a shop in the middle of the terminal. The woman took her young son by the arm and led him to the gate agent. She spoke quietly to the gate agent, then turned toward the shop, leaving the boy by the agent's side. When she caught up to her older son, her step quickened. He looked over his shoulder at his brother, torn, but continued with his mother. She never looked back; she just kept walking.
Oh Damn... my heart's in my throat. I think I'm going to cry. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment! That's a nasty mother, huh?
DeleteI'm glad she's not my mom. Oy! Great story.
ReplyDeleteIt was bad enough that she threatened to have the police take him to jail if he didn't get on the plane... then she just leaves him there?! That's awful- poor kid!
ReplyDeleteWhat a horrible thing to say about the police, right?
DeleteOh wow. How heart-wrenching. As if he wasn't scared enough to begin with. Excellent take on the prompts!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteWhen my youngest was lots younger she would not go to bed. She would climb out of her crib and leap to the floor to come back downstairs. We started tying the door shut and when she couldn't get the door open she would lay down on the floor and go to sleep. Ten minutes later we could untie the door and put her back in bed where she would sleep peacefully through the night. Sometimes, as a parent extreme measures are required. I feel more empathy for the mom here. Maybe it's just me.
ReplyDeleteGreat post.
I do feel for the mom's predicament, but I don't agree with how she handled it, and this is coming from a mother who's reversed her kid's doorknob to lock him in his bedroom. *hangs head in shame*
DeleteYikes! That kid is going to have some serious PTSD when he grows up.
ReplyDeleteReally well written twist-in-the tale.. loved it
ReplyDeleteI... my kid sister used to pull that stuff all the time. The only way to get her to come with you was to ACTUALLY leave. Like, drive away leave. My vote is with mom. But then, I also think she told the gate agent to keep an eye on the kid and make sure he followed.
ReplyDeleteI had in mind that the kid needed to get on the plane without the mom and brother, so they left and the gate agent had to put him on the plane. I guess I didn't make it clear. Actually, part of this story is an actual conversation I overheard in the airport, and I wasn't sure if the kid was meant to fly alone or with the family. Now that I think about it, though, I suppose the family wouldn't have been allowed through security unless they were also flying. Oops.
DeleteOh that poor kid! I feel so sorry for him. I was under the impression the gate agent was supposed to keep an eye on him and get him on the plane to go live with his father. That is maybe why they left him??
ReplyDeleteYes, that is essentially what I had in mind. Live with the father or visit the father -- something like that. And my husband told me that family can go to the gate with a minor traveling alone, so I guess it is possible...?
DeleteGreat twist on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteHow heartbreaking. I liked the format a lot.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Christi. Part of this really happened, and it was heartbreaking.
DeleteI wasn't expecting that ending. I agree mom is one tough cookie. If the small child is so stubborn to give up all his gifts; I have a feeling he has the lungs to summon her back and the cops to her door to pick him up. Wow.
ReplyDeleteGood point. Mom may not be done with this dilemma yet.
DeleteOh, my! This is so, so sad. I admire how you laid it out, both in terms of the content and the visual. There is so much to read into here. I just have a pang.
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading, and thanks for your comment!
DeleteCongrats on the Editor's Pick. I loved the format, too. No bad guys, just an unfortunate situation. :)
ReplyDeleteMy goodness she's vicious. She's not someone to make mad. This is seriously intense.
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