And there's the other side of the coin. Touche!
aHA! Nice zinger at the end.
Oooooohhhhhh! Smoooooth! Love it.
Wow--great ending! I loved the rhythm of all the complaints lined up.
I love the punch of this, the way it builds, and the way it contrasts with the genteel nature of your title. Fantastic!
Yes. I like this. The build is great and it's always nice to see the other side.
She can dish it out, but can she take it?
wow, and there ya have it. Nicely done!
And here's the other side of the story. And there always is one!!! This packs a punch!
Love the voice in this - there are always two sides. The listing of his 'failings' works very well. All we need now is to know how her current lover responded.
Great perspective, and a quick pace for putting us in his shoes. Loved it!
And there's the other side of the coin. Touche!
ReplyDeleteaHA! Nice zinger at the end.
ReplyDeleteOooooohhhhhh! Smoooooth! Love it.
ReplyDeleteWow--great ending! I loved the rhythm of all the complaints lined up.
ReplyDeleteI love the punch of this, the way it builds, and the way it contrasts with the genteel nature of your title. Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteYes. I like this. The build is great and it's always nice to see the other side.
ReplyDeleteShe can dish it out, but can she take it?
ReplyDeletewow, and there ya have it. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteAnd here's the other side of the story. And there always is one!!! This packs a punch!
ReplyDeleteLove the voice in this - there are always two sides. The listing of his 'failings' works very well. All we need now is to know how her current lover responded.
ReplyDeleteGreat perspective, and a quick pace for putting us in his shoes. Loved it!
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